Saturday, 16 June 2007

Adam Kirsch said it

The American critic Adam Kirsch wrote an interesting article, on the state of reviewing, in the New York Sun last week. I have been in a couple of conversations with fellow poets recently about the writing of reviews, and there is certainly plenty to discuss, so this piece pricked my interest. Good criticism is rare as gold-dust: reviews are so often these days nothing but anodyne descriptions of subject matter, with no context - often even of a poet's previous work - and no aesthetic discussion at all. Beyond the dichotomy of good and bad, it's as if we (as both writers and readers) have forgotten that there are other things that could even be said! And Kirsch is an important and prolific critic, so I was naturally keen to see what he'd say on the subject.

But he takes a sad little detour. Sad, because it has a knee-jerk feel about it, although ultimately I think he is right. And I suppose he can't help but venture, however briefly, down the road to Bloggersville for a quick look - it's only responsible*, after all the furore we've been having on the subject lately. He writes:

"In one sense, the democratization of discourse about books is a good thing, and should lead to a widening of our intellectual horizons. The more people there are out there reading, making discoveries, and advocating for their favorite books, the better. But book bloggers have also brought another, less salutary influence to bear on literary culture: a powerful resentment. Often isolated and inexperienced, usually longing to break into print themselves, bloggers — even the influential bloggers who are courted by publishers — tend to consider themselves disenfranchised. As a result, they are naturally ready to see ethical violations and conspiracies everywhere in the literary world. As anyone who reads literary blogs can attest, hell hath no fury like a blogger scorned. And the scorn is reciprocated: Professional writers usually assume that those who can, do, while those who can't, blog.

Well, I have to say I find Kirsch's varietal distinctions odd. I loathe this phrase everyone uses, the "democratisation" of literary discourse. As if anyone wasn't always free to say what they pleased! I always mention Daniel Defoe in this context; the only difference now is that it's free. This "professionalisation"of reviewers, along with its concomitant de-professionalisation of everyone else, leaves little room for artist-practitioners. Maybe where he perceives disenfranchisement and resentment, he's seeing writers who are annoyed at simply not being seen.

Plenty of published writers have blogs.

He does, however, concede:

"Still, it is important to distinguish between the blog as a genre and the Internet as a medium. It is not just possible but likely that, one day, serious criticism will find its primary home on the Web. The advantages — ease of access, low cost, potential audience — are too great to ignore, even if our habits and technology still make it hard to read long essays on the computer screen. Already there are some web publications — like Contemporary Poetry Review, to which I occasionally contribute — that match anything in print for seriousness of purpose. But there's no chance that literary culture will thrive on the Internet until we recognize that the ethical and intellectual crotchets of the bloggers represent a dead end."

So there you have the, or a, nexus of my interest: Adam Kirsch and I, one a professional and one a crotchet, both write for the same journal.**

The fact that it's an online journal rather puts paid to his earlier statement in the article, to wit, "People who write about books on the Internet, and they are surprisingly numerous, do not call themselves reviewers, but bloggers. " Kirsch's categorisation being based on the medium, rather than - as one might say - the message, contributes to the general confinement of the discussion to stereotype. James Marcus, for example, has had some interesting things to say from his vantage point as erstwhile editor at amazon.com, one of which was that things haven't really changed all that much.

Anyway, aside from all the squabbling (and it would be refreshing to read an article that didn't squabble about this; surely every newspaper or magazine review, and every blog, can stand or fall on its merits?), Kirsch makes some valuable observations about the limitations of form:

"
In fact, despite what the bloggers themselves believe, the future of literary culture does not lie with blogs — or at least, it shouldn't. The blog form, that miscellany of observations, opinions, and links, is not well-suited to writing about literature, and it is no coincidence that there is no literary blogger with the audience and influence of the top political bloggers. For one thing, literature is not news the way politics is news — it doesn't offer multiple events every day for the blogger to comment on. For another, bitesized commentary, which is all the blog form allows, is next to useless when it comes to talking about books. Literary criticism is only worth having if it at least strives to be literary in its own right, with a scope, complexity, and authority that no blogger I know even wants to achieve. The only useful part of most book blogs, in fact, are the links to long-form essays and articles by professional writers, usually from print journals."

This paragraph does irk, with its unsubstantiated generalisations about what bloggers believe, and what bloggers want. I also think Kirsch is wrong about the nature of the difference between political and literary blogs: I think that it's a market-driven issue (by which I don't mean money, I mean what people perceive that they want, and whether there are punters). It's worth noting, too, that his assertion that political blogging enjoys much greater influence, fails to take note of the constant debate that rages about whether blogging can ever "be proper journalism." (Sound familiar?) He doesn't mention scientific blogs at all, though I believe blogs are important in scientific communities. And that content is different again.

I've often specifically thought that there don't seem to be that many really interesting literary blogs, of the kind I once imagined would be two-a-penny. I mean trenchant analysis, fresh thinking, informed blogs that would satisfy a certain thirst I have for criticism.*** I see no reason why bite-sized chunks couldn't be as informative and even influential in the literary sphere as they are in the political. After all, politics is certainly no less complicated and tricky than literature; it may be more a matter of utilising one's metier.

As it happens, I've learned a lot in my one year (so far) of writing a blog. When I started I sort of imagined myself writing the kind of thing Kirsch describes, and quickly found that for some reason it is almost impossible. It is simply a different form. So, yes, the links to "proper" articles are invaluable. Space, or more properly time, is certainly an issue, especially if you're envisaging a TLS-style in-depth consideration of a writer. Blogs just aren't designed to be used that way. I should also think that most people who feel inclined to write in-depth criticism do have other outlets for it, and probably place it with a friendly editor - for money, for a wider readership, and not least because it will get taken a lot more seriously if it isn't on their blog!

Certainly a lot of bloggers post cursory paragraphs about their subject, linking to a longer published piece, and fool themselves into thinking they've actually written something. I read one last week where someone referred to "what I wrote about so-&-so" - and in fact he'd written four rather dull lines, and then linked to a very entertaining article. I've probably done that myself. I like to think if I do it that at least I'm adding some small thing to the mix with my cursory paragraph; sometimes it can be a hitherto-unseen link between two linked things. Blogs impose a pressure to post - every day, every two days.

Blogs are more personality-driven than straight literary criticism: I think of them as more analagous to a weekly newspaper column. And a lot of them are consistently better, funnier, fresher, more zeitgeist-feeling than anything in the newspapers (the sainted Michael Bywater excepted, of course; his bitter rants are indispensible; but then, he also has a blog).*** The paragraphs are shorter I think, which mitigates against long, carefully-reasoned arguments.

I've found in practice that the blog format works best for these linky pieces (and, time-consumingly, for sort of "conference call" pieces, where you can almost conduct - in the musical sense - a conversation between different articles or writers by linking to them within your argument - the links being shorthand, of course, with its own danger of shorthand thinking). It's good for personal reflections on things I've read, for anecdote, for quick reactions to news, statements, events. It works for trying out ideas, really as if it were a notebook (one that can give you feedback); it works for ideas you want to illustrate with pictures. It can develop into a sort of letter to your readers, which might - who knows! - have possibilities, as we are otherwise losing our epistolary forms. It's also good for the good old writer's diary. There are a few poets who write about their creative processes, ideas, daily writing life - and who sometimes post up draft versions of poems in progress. All this is not the same as criticism, but it could conceivably be of future interest to critics (or even biographers) - as well as current interest to other writers, students, etc - and as such is a resource.

This is all in addition to the main thing that blogs are good for, of course: short bits of information. Blog format is great for listings, news flashes, little round-ups. Interactive content, like polls or questions.

What it just doesn't seem to lend itself to is the long, carefully researched & reasoned, meticulously argued piece, with quotations and possibly footnotes, that might establish you as a serious critic. The software itself simply isn't built for it. I've certainly found all this to be true, and Baroque in Hackney has duly taken shape around these possibilities and limitations. Crucially - or shall I say critically - it has also taken its shape firmly within blog culture, rather than literary-journal culture.

In other words, I'm a writer: I (hope I) know what I'm doing.

Instead of taking the reader's (passive) vantage point, casting an ungenerous eye on blogs because they aren't doing the same thing as the LRB, it might be more useful - in the context of a shared concern for the future of serious literature and critical thought - to look at them from the vantage point of a writer. A blog is a thing to write. What is it? What is it good for? What will it throw into the mix that you, as the writer, hadn't thought of doing before?
How can you use it to enrich your own ability to write about literature? How could the literary world best use blogs to enrich its culture?

Equally, what isn't it? What is it not succeeding in doing? What do we still need, even when we have blogging?

Of course many blogs are barely literate. Many more are fine, but most don't stretch their critical wings very much. These serve a purpose, for sure, but it is not the same as the purpose served by serious criticism. It can't possibly be, and never was intended to be.**** The real danger to our literary culture probably lies in forgetting to make this distinction - in fact, in failing to cast a critical eye on what is really happening.

In short, I think we agree. As with most family arguments - it not being only perfect happiness that's always the same - it turns out that this may not even be an argument at all, but a case of saying the same thing in different ways. Now it's going to be all about what we do with it...

* After all, as Kirsch says, it's wrong to review a book without reading it.

** and I'm a fan - both of CPR and of Kirsch.

*** sorry if this seems harsh! The two best things I have read recently on blogs, in this regard, are George Szirtes' gripping account of Yevtushenko at a poetry conference last week - which I wrote about, but got no comments at all on - and Jane Holland's incisive and honest reading of Annie Freud's new book. In both cases, check out also their following days' posts. Another thing you can do with a blog is have more, or second, thoughts and continue the discussion as you go.

****a swift bit of research on Wikipedia turns up the fact that he also has a pair of crocodile shoes: can the man do no wrong??

***** and if mainstream papers are worried that no one will be able to tell the difference, maybe they should raise their game a little and publish more challenging reviews.

11 comments:

Andrew Philip said...

Good, thought provoking post, Mme Baroque. For me, the element of conversation is probably the most exciting part of the blog (not that there's been that much conversation on Tonguefire, sadly).

Have you seen Barbaric Document? It's more in the vein of the TLS-type essay. Worth a look, although I have to confess I've only read "The Compicity of Paul Celan" and "The Politics of Ian McEwan's 'Saturday'".

Quink said...

I'm all for short, linky pieces too. I've been reading about Kirsch at normblog and elsewhere and, as yet, the best remark I've heard on his article is this:

Is Adam Kirsch living in some alternate universe where print literary writing has an audience to rival dead tree political journalism? This rather points up a weakness of print: book reviewers* are fooled into confusing their newspaper's circulation with the number of people who actually read their opinions on Proust.

From here.

Background Artist said...

Hi Katy

I have been following your blog, more recently than when you started and it has done you good, and a great place to practice and learn.

I have been blogging for about 21/2 years, not having a clue about what it was for, but after creating four as the various registers in ones voice appeared (critical/satire/street talk etc) i realised that these early blogs were the process i had to go through to find ones voice.

Anthony Cronin's Memoir:Dead As Doornails was the one book that i took as the ultimate template for a breezy bitchy critic, and i don't mean bitchy in a pejorative sense, but more the cut, thrust, run-through and literary combatitive skill one needs in the totally mediatized age.

I have always argued and still maintain that the internet is a force for literate good, in the wider and widest sense, as all who feel excluded or uncertain around the fictional literary citadels that spring up in the prescence of bores like this fella wotsit?

I'm not being facetious , i can't be arsed copying and pasting to click back and re-read it, as wot he's on about beneath the surface of his piece reveals more about him and his personal concerns than any amazing insight into litearture.

The blog v Author debate is getting a bit like the "wot is real poetry" one, circular and pointless.

This fella is a writer for the rags and proper print author. If he had a commission to spend a year blogging, chances are he would be raving about them, and it is impossible to take his words at face value for me, as i detect that the real subtext and first spark of psychic energy which led to whatever wordcount he did, was a blog-negative one, and the fun starts when we reverse the psychology of his lines and mosie on into his mind, winners already by sheer dint of even getting there .

"There" is a place we are all excluded from as writers, but not Writers. When we start out lacking any ouevre and credibility, when pure potential is all we can safely claim to possess, and so how does one advance to this shadowy dell and get supping with the wine and cheese brigade at top table?

I witnessed Paula Meehan do a short but very wise spiel in October 2005 on the night Joe Horgan was unveiled as that years winner, in the 100 year of Kavanagh's birth.

She was speaking as a literary insider, saying that when one begins we feel excluded from this Literary Citadel, LC, capital top place where all the real writers hang out, all bezzy mates, us thinking that their books we don't read are crap and probably plagerisations, whatever it is, we are definitley barred, one poor soul unfairly kept out, because we are a threat and too talented, we dream.

I read a great piece, i think it was at the barber's Ros. About students hating her and focussing all their energy of exclusion her way, as she is the representitive of Literature to the kids in class.

The balancing anecdote to Barber's is one i read in Cronin's memoir about how other writers in Dublin were like a man in Cavan eating his dinner out of a drawer so he could close it should anyone break into his house and come through the door for a dance or summat.

Tony said that they all believe other writers are out to sabotage and steal their ideas, and should they be in blockage, blame this shady, silent conspiracy between the rest of the word, plotting their downfall, and even though the milleau Cronin was then referring to was more open mic than Aosdána, he and nehan neginning on the path to litearte success, it runs throughout the Art world.

I reckon the reality wot is going on wiv wotsit is that he is confirming and affirming his own belief on the overall low quality of most blogs, and it is default mode for commentators of his ilk to make huge pronouncements about the future of whatever it is they are discussing, but the reality is that what we get is the opinion of a man who writes all day, offering us the contents of his mind, that's it.

No one's opinion is correct or infallible and this man's thoughts are no more relevant than a dying muslim in iraq we will never know or hear of.

Meehan said that after a few years writing, after trying to get through, under and over the chimerical Literary Citadel walls, we go to the door, it is open and we walk right in to find we were wrong.

We self-exclude on the very subtle, silent say so of whoevers controlling the lingo, the TV readers script, Gordy's speechwriter if he has one, who is it?

Do we know?

Look at wotsit spin doctor, the real power he had as wot? A gobby git, silent in the background when the real decisions were made. The Loyal one drafting his own memoirs in that moment i bet, almost.

~

I have noticed on my journey to free speech that most writers clique together, form pools and plan in writerly clans, play games and do battle when whoever the leaders are engineer them to the fray, and what i have learnt from the www is that the Groups and Movements, the Chaps, Lords and Ladies configure in when soley print writers, have decapitalised to survive, gone human and more aware of the boundaryless reality of writing and electronic print.

The www effectively means total inclusion in print for any with internet access, not ideal but still a what? 50 million times increase in speech.

I won't be foolish enough to predict that this or that concrete outcome will come to be, but those in the forefront of the bore-floes , the e-ho's and gigilos, cannot fail to have an outlet for their work, and i think the one lesson the net taught me, is that the only way to learn how to write is just bleddy do it, and there are at least one post i have read here that i know was you on a downer - eyes - and after reading it i had a lot more respect for you as a writer, because it was totally honest and i think that what writing leads to.

Bill Naughton who wrote Alfie was from Aughmore in county Mayo and didn't start writing till in his 30's. His first book was an autobiography, written as an unknown, and he really hit his stride in his fories, non stop then till he died, and he has very wise advice on the wider debate this is part of, literate Art.

I don't have it to hand, but he says that he learned how to love writing by religiously setting aside time in the day to practice it until it became second nature to him.

He learned to love his muse, and the bit i implemented into my own practice was when he says he always "keeps a bit back for God." So now i chop.

Ms Baroque said...

Quink, your link isn't working - I'm duplicating it here.

Well, Jane was definitely pithier than me! But as I've been having specifically blogging/reviewing conversations lately I wanted to unpick it a little in that way, too.

The real issue - aside from that fact that blogs and book reviews are two different things - is that they are often written by the same people.

And Norman Geras is right: where I gave Adam Kirsch the benefit of the doubt and compared blogs with your 5,000-word piece of wisdom to pass down the ages, Norm rightly points out that a blog post is more than a match for an 800-word newspaper review.

My post here is 2,000 words - I checked - and I notice you guys got to the end.

Now: is my writing inferior to a newspaper review? If so, that may well be a different issue. And if it is, is that because I wasn't asked to write it, or paid to write it, or subbed? (I'd love a sub.)

Andrew, I just looked at Barbaric Document.

Interestingly, the blogger gives his name as Ellisbarb. This immediately puts me in mind of one Ellis Sharp, who writes a nominally literary blog (he has a thing for Shakespeare) called The Sharp Side. He's also virulently anti-Iraeli. I'd say he's so anti-Israeli that he's functionally anti-semitic (and that's giving him the benefit of the doubt).

Sure enough, the very top post on this blog is an insanely long (7,000-word!) attack on a memoir by an Israeli writer, a rabid anti-Israeli polemic built on the writer's "moral complacency," etc, thinly disguised as a book review. Sections are in bold.

As a very brief example: "Appelfeld’s reduction of the war to the “ancient curse” of anti-Semitism is characteristic of his attitude to all modern Middle Eastern history. As far as he is concerned the clock stopped in the early 1940s. Europe is a hotbed of anti-Semitism. The Middle East is a hotbed of anti-Semitism. Israel represents world Jewry. Israel is hated because it is a Jewish state.

As an alibi for Zionism it’s so threadbare it’s barely worth engaging with."

And then the next post is The Complicity of Paul Celan?

Give me a break.

Mere hobby-horse blogging, I'm afraid, and as such an excellent example of the kind of thing that gives "literary: blogs a bad name.

Desmond: excellent! "etry" one, circular and pointless.

This fella is a writer for the rags and proper print author. If he had a commission to spend a year blogging, chances are he would be raving about them..." Spot-on, I suspect.

You also raise a spot-on point about disaffection as per Ros Barber's story.

Great comment. My blog is clearly doing both of us good!

Quink said...

I know, Ms Baroque, but I was being a little naughty and seeing if I could get away with posting a cursory paragraph or so whilst linking to a (not much longer) piece.

To be fair, I agree with your points apart from when you say blogs don't lend themselves to "long, carefully researched & reasoned, meticulously argued piece, with quotations". They do, if that piece is good enough to attract readers (not to be confused with commenters). That said, those pieces probably need to be part of a broader mix if you're going to get readers in the first place. Sure, the piece you've just written is 2,000 words, but it's because I've read shorter pieces by you that are good that I bothered to read all the way through. On many blogs I wouldn't...

So, quality, not format is the issue for me. And I think blogs contribute a great deal - and this comes back to Jane's point - because the people who read literary blogs want to read about literary things, unlike most newspaper readers who very rarely want (or bother) to read other people's opinions on Proust.

Ms Baroque said...

Quink, how you do go on...

Right enough, though, I think quality is at the bottom of it (& ta). It's like democracy: we get what we're satisfied with. And of course great point about readers and commenters! What a thorny path we tread.

By the way, speaking of quality, mine's up the spout. My fix on your link didn't work: it's a blog called Asymmetrical Information. My copy-&-paste quote of Desmond's comment didn't work: sorry, guys - you'll have to look in his long comment above for it. He was spot-on, though.

The Fool said...

It seems the resentment Kirsch notes runs both ways. Such resentments seem unfounded and secular as the two forms serve very different purposes and needs. To expect them to be the same seems naive. Good writing is rare in any medium, and the true measure for any person as to what has merit should not be the sole province of critics. Also, both forms represent many genres...they are not a genre unto themselves. Thank you for the thought-provoking post.

R.H. said...

I'd never deny the knowledge I've gained from reading blogs like yours.

Background Artist said...

Sorry katy, i forgot to say thanks very much. And yes, you are right, your blog is a positive thing in my life, and you are doing great, getting better all the time. I remember coming across sweary a year back when she started out and noted her utterly original comic voice, and she is getting better all the time, just like you here.

The posts that have fixed my eye most are ones which related to when you were having a bad run physically as the voice was more human, and since that piece i detected a shift to a more relaced and freer register, tone and style as your blog experience pot fills with words and also detect that this outled has been good for your spirit, as your readers clucked round offering supportive comment, impossible in the other arena of egos jostling.

I used poem uk purely to learn how to duell with ruthless wits and wags, the aristoi of English poetic utterance and was a grove of learning for a long time, but this natural course ended and i progreesed to trolling on the guardian now, uncaring who thinks waht as i learnt in the fray at poem uk with you.

Sincerely

Ms Baroque said...

Fool, you're right about the resentment running both ways! Lordy.

RH, I should certainly think not. Anyway, we live to serve.

Desmond, and thanks for that, what a nice thing to write. And you're right, I hope the blog is a haven from the "arena of egos jostling." I know people say blogs are all ABOUT egos, but I don't really feel it that way. Maybe some are.

Sweary's a star, isn't she. She's a riot - and so incisive. I can't believe she's only like 25. (Anyone not sure who Sweary is should check out The Arse End of Ireland." You'll never regret it.)

Andrew Philip said...

Ah, now. Thanks for that. As my comment makes clear, I haven't read the top post at Barbaric Document so hadn't seen quite how anti-Semitic Ellisbarb can be. And I had no notion of who the blogger is.

The Celan post interested me because I love Celan's work. It's disappointing that it engages with only one poem and spends so much time on the 1967 war. I've been thinking of blogging on the essay, asking whether it makes a blind bit of difference to "Todesfuge". I don't think it does, and "Todesfuge" represents the measure of Celan's worth as a writer.

One of the motivating factors for pointing you towards that site was the length of the posts, given what you posted about the shortness of blog posts mitigating against developing arguments properly. The Barbaric Document posts are essays more than posts. But then my reading of the two I mentioned was quite swift. I don't read particularly well when I read swiftly, but I often read online stuff more quickly than I read a book because I'm either reading it at work or in between bits of baby care and writing. I find it easier to read more closely in a book, perhaps because it's easier to find your place with a bookmark. (Shoddy excuse, I know.)

I note that Barbaric document has no comments facility. Always telling, I think, as one of the glories of blogging is the conversation. What you point out about the politics of that blog makes it clearer why no comments are allowed (he's obviously feart). Now I think about it, I suppose it's really a political blog masquerading as a literary one.

Did you read the post on McEwan's "Saturday"? I'd be interested to see what you think of that.